too much overedited (TOO MUCH EFFECTS), ugly colours (Sony vegas has is own plugins, use them!), awful gun sounds (use original 1.6 gun sounds), low fps (use sps/fps), sync on every beat (Retard Sync).
I'm not a hater or something, I only want to help :\
1st - no, that isn't cs 1.6 original sounds. (here: http://www.authentic-pictures.net/downloads/?did=3..
2nd - 500 fps?! shit! try using sps and fps (google it)
3rd - I know that you synced, but ON EVERY FUCKING BEAT OF THE SONG! That's fucking annoying, keep it simple! (Don't try to edit like my old videos, they are awful)
Too short...
Too many unnecessary effects...
Music is just facepalm...
Well u have skills, but try developing your taste and try to search tracks which could fit cs movie better that this.