drums have way too much high tempo man
not rly good
too high tempo for chill music, and not loungy/jazzy enough
well since lofi is so popular rn, people will listen anything you make lmao
also good stuff for first try would wanna see you progress 10/10
drums are not in the same texture of the piano, also the drums are way too loud.
If you use FLStudio, go to the mixer -> master -> remove "Fruity Limiter", it makes your sound louder and distorted, you cant produce with it because you're not hearing what you're actually making, but a maked up supposed-to-be-mastered version of your song.
You can only use FruityLimiter, Maximus, Ozone when you're almost done.
I recommend you to watch BusyWorksBeats's youtube channel, he produces hip hop but you're not there for the style, you're there for the knowledge.
what did u use to make this
Get mafz and lazzzy drum kits also search reddit for free drum kits, can you link what stuff are you trying to make so i can send you some good channels and tutorials
no idea how to explain but the hi-hat is hurting my ears, too high pitched maybe?