Pick up fucking guitar and write something natural.
One thing is the snare you are using is too acoustic for the track, try sticking with the same type of style of instrument,. I would give it a more electronic snare, but overall it sounds like a good track for a game like terraria.
After watching Bohemian Rhapsody everything other than Queen or rock in general just sounds bad to me lmao
mby decrease the highs of the first PL a bit & put some reverb on the snare. Also try to change the melody of the bass a bit. But those are some high level complains
Love it, can I use it in a video? I'll give you credit ofc.
nice "music", try using some instruments next time