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Rate my beat x12
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
soundcloud.com/noahrivxra/swang-prod-noa.. By the word 'beat', I meant, rate my musical production. So, there will be no violence, I'm kind person.
2019-02-11 20:46
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fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
(There's no violence).
2019-02-11 20:49
#2
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
(I said, there's no violence, just rate my musical production).
2019-02-11 20:55
#12
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
(I need a critism, which will improve the quality of my production).
2019-02-11 21:08
(reported for bumping your thread)
2019-02-11 21:14
#18
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
(I said, there's no violence).
2019-02-11 21:16
#3
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Palestine Baitor69 
WTF why do you killed him! YOU MONSTER!!!!11111!!!
2019-02-11 20:55
#6
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
What are you talkin' 'bout? Oh, yeah, reread my description, my friend, you will understand why.
2019-02-11 20:59
#7
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Palestine Baitor69 
'm t'l'i'g 'b'u' y'u 'i'l''i'g' h'm 'o' m'n'e'!
2019-02-11 21:01
#4
MICHU | 
Slovakia S1W0 
It could be worse not something I would listen to tho
2019-02-11 20:57
#9
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
I don't know, what you like to listen, so I can't make an analogy. Better give me a honest critique, and say what's bad.
2019-02-11 21:03
#28
MICHU | 
Slovakia S1W0 
Idk to much weird sounds and kinda sounds like a mumble beat
2019-02-11 21:30
no thx
2019-02-11 20:58
#8
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Palestine Baitor69 
heard him, he's smart
2019-02-11 21:02
meh
2019-02-11 21:03
#11
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
I don't know, why you think like that about yourself, but I need a critism, which will improve the quality of my production.
2019-02-11 21:08
2019-02-11 21:11
#15
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
I don't know why is he beatin' screen, but I need a criticism, for real. I want to raise the quality, do you know what I'm sayin'?
2019-02-11 21:13
Well I'm no producer but it sounds rather basic you know? Try to find new samples, look at more advanced "guides" etc. Kick it up a notch basically, and you won't get any good responses here dude, try a subreddit for these kind of things if you want some good criticism. GL!
2019-02-11 21:18
The main line is quiet good, but imo the extra sound that you've put on it doesn't fit (mainly the synth a 0.37). Maybe change the architecture of the beat too, do some longer phase instead of just add a new thing evey 2 cycle
2019-02-11 21:13
#17
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
Yeah, thank you. What do you think I should use instead of this (actually, it's a pluck) 'synth'?
2019-02-11 21:16
idk dude, i don't do type beat, but maybe find something more soft on the ears and change the note to be into the chord of the main line
2019-02-11 21:20
totally remove reeverb on kick?
2019-02-11 21:20
#23
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
What?
2019-02-11 21:22
kick has a reeverb on it. Try to remove it or even better change the kick. You are probably using entire riiddim sample if you cannot do that....
2019-02-11 21:29
#29
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
I don't know where did you get this, there's actually no reverb in this sample. But I'd put a small reverb on my melodies, hats & clap before, are you confused probably?
2019-02-11 21:38
#21
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Russia VeryChokeGuy 
Quite good. Not perfect, but ok.
2019-02-11 21:20
#25
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
Oh, what prevents it from becomin' perfect?
2019-02-11 21:22
#33
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Russia VeryChokeGuy 
tbh i can't even understand. But something isn't right imo. I mean, maybe it's just for me. Feels like not the perfect one.
2019-02-11 21:50
#24
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Netherlands BigMarvin 
Sounds like a ghost is haunting a 100 year old gramophone
2019-02-11 21:22
#26
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
Never heard of ghosts bein' real, but I also have dreams like that sometimes. But, men, do you know what I'm sayin'? I need a real criticism, you can give me a big advice to improve my stuff.
2019-02-11 21:28
#30
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Russia FanatHoocha 
me liked :)
2019-02-11 21:43
#32
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
Thank you! But actually, I'm askin' for a criticism, do you have a bad words about my stuff?
2019-02-11 21:47
#31
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Dominican Republic SantoDomingo 
Ok beats
2019-02-11 21:45
#34
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Norway AleXeiCS 
Needs vocal, I hate instrumentals x)
2019-02-11 21:52
dopeeee bro mind checking me out? soundcloud.com/user-388891986/free-21-sa..
2019-02-11 21:53
#36
fnx | 
Sweden Blueface 
I can say, it's a nice idea, but you should work on your mix. Seems good.
2019-02-12 14:33
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