Overall i really like the mood, really nice.
I do kinda feel like the rhodes and the bell clash in places though. I think because you're playing a higher melody on the rhodes at the same time as the bell and there is no connection between the two. They dont play off each other or compliment each other, its just like two random melodies thrown together. Maybe keep the rhodes focused on the low end and have the bell sound take the lead on the highs for most of it, then when you do bring them together it'll have more impact. Like when it drops at 1:30 its perfect because the two melodies compliment each other and leave space for everything to breathe inbetween you know. Just remember that sometimes the most important notes are the ones that arent there. Because then at 1:44 the melodies just start to wonder around again disconnected and it feels cluttered.
As far as the 808 like i said earlier, i listened with my proper headphones and theyre fine. Sorry about that.