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thoughts on song im making
conoR | 
United Kingdom EricClapton 
youtu.be/h5YvTqeAsW0 its called “Time comes to an end...” Verse 1: Could have said goodbye, after all this time Could have changed or tried, after all this time Chorus 1: Seems as if i can’t let go of the past So I’m waiting for an end Verse 2: Could have been your help, after all this time Could have not been farewell , after all this time Chorus 2: You just took the best of me It’s just not the same without you in the end Bridge: Even if we didn’t have the same blood me and you went through dirt and mud My heart won’t smile again and maybe it’s time for the end Chorus 3: Life is too short and I can’t see you again But at least time comes to an end
2020-01-21 05:00
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bump 🚫🧢
2020-01-21 15:50
#2
God | 
Poland henlo 
sounds very basic and the lyrics are gay i hope youre not going for the bruno mars voice
2020-01-21 15:52
bruh moment
2020-01-21 15:53
He was going for the bruno mars voice
2020-01-21 17:17
no what the fuck is a bruno mars voice
2020-01-21 17:18
I have no idea.
2020-01-21 17:19
bruh
2020-01-21 17:20
#4
Happy | 
Russia Jovik! 
I need to hear the vocal melody, the chords are sweet.
2020-01-21 15:53
wdym chords are sweet
2020-01-21 16:47
#24
Happy | 
Russia Jovik! 
Lyrics are disgrace though, honestly, worse than a 3 chord rock lyric. I liked the music sequence in your piece and I wonder what is that lyric melody you came up with.
2020-01-21 16:58
ouch
2020-01-21 15:53
what
2020-01-21 16:48
#7
2020-01-21 16:48
how
2020-01-21 16:49
did you read the lyrics?
2020-01-21 16:49
yes
2020-01-21 16:50
then thanks for understanding
2020-01-21 16:50
no i still dont
2020-01-21 16:53
#6
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United Kingdom Tormaz 
Sounds great, especially when I set volume to 0. Emotional song, gives me Holocaust vibes.
2020-01-21 15:54
🤡 e
2020-01-21 16:47
#7
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Finland mens)))))))))) 
cringe
2020-01-21 15:54
116 word song 0/8 in my eyes
2020-01-21 16:52
its still in the making
2020-01-21 16:55
whats your motivation?
2020-01-21 17:20
its about my childhood
2020-01-21 17:24
and to make music? you just do it for fun? to vent? to be a musician one day maybe?
2020-01-21 17:27
read my name bruh
2020-01-21 20:10
bruh
2020-01-21 20:57
#18
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Israel BingoBango 
could be worse, keep grinding
2020-01-21 16:54
ok epic ty
2020-01-21 16:55
#21
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Poland WildM 
Nice song :)
2020-01-21 16:56
what
2020-01-21 16:56
#23
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Poland WildM 
Wrong thread XD I had to post it in another one XD
2020-01-21 16:57
oh
2020-01-21 17:00
I'm waiting for a random guy here from HLTV to vocaroo the lyrics
2020-01-21 16:59
wtf xd
2020-01-21 17:00
#30
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Israel BingoBango 
that would be so funny lmao
2020-01-21 17:16
Why is the fifth chord out of key? The whole thing seems to be D minor, but that one chord is off.
2020-01-21 17:11
its a: 1-3-6-6/5-2m7-5-1 Key: b flat
2020-01-21 17:16
It just sounded a bit off to me so I recreated it in FL studio and it all fit D minor except that fifth chord, so I tried B flat major and saw I was off on one note in that chord and fixed it. Btw I know very, very little about music and don't have a clue how to read that progression you wrote lmao
2020-01-21 17:27
okay its b flat major - d minor - g minor - g minor/f - cm7 without the g - F major - b flag major
2020-01-21 21:17
Gotta get back to learning music theory. Started 2 times already but lost motivation quite quickly. Might come in handy since I decided to learn how to play guitar.
2020-01-21 21:23
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oBo | 
Korea Moms_touch 
If you add strings.. Eww it will be too cheesy
2020-01-21 17:28
I’m no musician but this sounds boring as fuck.
2020-01-21 20:18
gay lyrics.
2020-01-21 21:27
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