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r8 my new song
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Canada ropzGOD 
Released a new song and I would love to hear some insights and critic. If you dont like this genre of music, please give honest criticsm and dont just say its bad, because you dont like this type of music, maybe elaborate is what i am trying to say. YouTube: youtu.be/WYhPdqkwH-0
2020-01-24 20:02
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i kinda like it, but your voice...meh not so much.. ill give it 6/10 😎
2020-01-24 20:04
#4
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Canada ropzGOD 
Yeah, it sounds weird sometimes and im never able to consistently keep it the same. Thank you though.
2020-01-24 20:07
#13
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Canada ropzGOD 
Bump
2020-01-24 20:16
#14
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Canada ropzGOD 
Bump 2
2020-01-24 20:20
#50
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Canada ropzGOD 
Bump
2020-01-24 21:11
#68
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Canada ropzGOD 
bummp
2020-01-24 22:29
#81
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Canada ropzGOD 
Bump
2020-01-25 13:08
it kinda sounds like you're nose is blocked, whats up with that?
2020-01-25 13:23
#89
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Canada ropzGOD 
that is my shitty voice x)
2020-01-25 13:24
i thought maybe you added some weird equalizers you can adjust to make it sound better but do what works for you my friend
2020-01-25 13:43
#2
tabseN | 
Europe oofmens 
its alright man nothing bad about it, keep it going and keep getting better
2020-01-24 20:06
#5
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Canada ropzGOD 
Thank youu bro i will
2020-01-24 20:07
#15
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Canada ropzGOD 
Yes you will!
2020-01-24 20:22
#3
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Yugoslavia seeeed 
Quite average soundloud cloud rap tbh.
2020-01-24 20:07
#6
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Canada ropzGOD 
Thats what i am looking for thank you
2020-01-24 20:07
#9
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Yugoslavia seeeed 
Its neither amazing or bad. Its p mediocre, but i can see it being put into some random ass playlist of simmiliar music tbh. Also reminded me of this soundcloud.com/matter4k/all-the-time-w-s..
2020-01-24 20:09
#11
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Canada ropzGOD 
Oh yeah I am a big fan of sebii, wouldnt say he is that big of an inspiration to me but i really appreciate his music. Also thank you, I have seen it being added to some, never really knowing why though.
2020-01-24 20:12
#7
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Spain Kyuuta 
solid 7/10, keep at it
2020-01-24 20:08
#8
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Canada ropzGOD 
Wooooow thanks
2020-01-24 20:08
If you cant sing without autotune imo you shouldnt sing at all
2020-01-24 20:11
#12
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Canada ropzGOD 
I can, but I use it as an aesthetic because I like the sound of it and the vibe, atmosphere.
2020-01-24 20:12
"yeah, it sounds weird sometimes and im never able to consistently keep it the same. " That give us an example of you singing. Lets hear your voice without autotune. I have no problem with posting something I sing aswell.
2020-01-25 14:38
#99
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Canada ropzGOD 
I am sick rn so that wont work
2020-01-25 15:17
Sure, thats the only reason. Your voice sucks, just like it is for 99% of people that use it.
2020-01-25 15:47
#103
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Canada ropzGOD 
i have said here that my voice sucks, but I am also sick right now. And again, I franklöy dont care if you think I cant sing.
2020-01-25 17:14
Someone else: "If you cant sing without autotune imo you shouldnt sing at all" You: "I can, but I use it as an aesthetic because I like the sound of it and the vibe, atmosphere." Also you: "i have said here that my voice sucks" hmmmm You wanted opinions on your music. So im taking about it. Your voice sucks AND you use autotune, the lyrics have nothing worth listening to and the beat sounds like its produced by someone that watched a tutorial on youtube and then copied the sounds. I wouldnt even know where to start when talking about "aesthetics" of this. Yeah.....
2020-01-25 20:39
#51
tarik | 
Norway MD! 
No rapper or singer in 2020 can rap or sing without autotune you moron, all your favourite songs are good because of it.
2020-01-24 21:26
#54
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Canada ropzGOD 
+1
2020-01-24 21:49
Yung Gravy
2020-01-24 22:06
#59
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Canada ropzGOD 
he still has it on his voice, just very limited.
2020-01-24 22:07
agreed, but on a way lover level than many other "artists"
2020-01-24 22:09
#63
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Canada ropzGOD 
that is true
2020-01-24 22:10
:) yes
2020-01-24 22:14
#65
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Canada ropzGOD 
yes ty for bump
2020-01-24 22:16
np ez for moosesyrupman
2020-01-24 22:19
#67
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Canada ropzGOD 
yesyesimgermanthoughandfakeflagging :>
2020-01-24 22:22
thats why i dont generally listen to new music lmao
2020-01-25 00:55
#74
tarik | 
Norway MD! 
You don't listen to new music, yet you feel obliged to criticize someone on something that is done in every new song.
2020-01-25 03:17
im telling people to stop using autotune it doesnt matter if everyone is doing it, it's still garbage
2020-01-25 04:47
#78
tarik | 
Norway MD! 
That's your opinion, too bad that it's irrelevant and moronic since all the banger songs use it, especially rap songs. It's an industry standard now, deal with it.
2020-01-25 05:37
wrong comment but whatever
2020-01-25 05:42
#115
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Germany LiVerGOD 
>banger >rap songs You gotta real good taste I assume
2020-01-26 18:43
#116
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Canada ropzGOD 
he does
2020-02-07 14:28
l m a o Most of the rap and pop is just manufactured. Most of it isn't awful, but none of it is actually good. I can still appreciate someone like Eminem and his ability, even if I don't like rap. I can still appreciate Adell and her voice, even if I don't care for her music. The vast majority of music now is just meh, none of it takes very much talent or ability. I can't change it, you're right, it still pisses me off how much music has degraded.
2020-01-25 05:41
#84
Happy | 
Russia Jovik! 
That's why it's so bad.
2020-01-25 13:14
#16
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Portugal R4nger)( 
7/10
2020-01-24 20:26
#18
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Canada ropzGOD 
Thanks
2020-01-24 20:28
its not bad but pretty average ( imo). you should work on your voice it lacks a bit of power ,a lesson with a teacher never hurt nobody.
2020-01-24 20:27
#19
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Canada ropzGOD 
#4 But thank you, appreciate the criticsm
2020-01-24 20:28
#20
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Canada ropzGOD 
hltv is a nicer place now since they changed the mobile app ngl
2020-01-24 20:28
das its eine gut rappen amerikanshe stylen gevesen
2020-01-24 20:31
#23
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Canada ropzGOD 
Thank you mr sweden, though you could have just said that in english, because you had like 6 spelling errors and the whole sentence is grammatically broken.
2020-01-24 20:34
I know I never studied german so I dont know about the grammar I just take some random words
2020-01-24 20:34
#29
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Canada ropzGOD 
I mean I understood what you wanted to say, it was just really bad
2020-01-24 20:38
#22
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Lithuania MindReflex 
it's pretty catchy, i like it
2020-01-24 20:34
#24
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Canada ropzGOD 
Thank you!!
2020-01-24 20:34
#26
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North America Gumdrop 
0/10 stopped listening when I noticed the anime pfp.
2020-01-24 20:36
#27
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Canada ropzGOD 
HOLY SHIT AHHHHH Thank you for reminding me I have this disgrace, and I will swiftly remove it. You should still lusten to it
2020-01-24 20:38
I don't like the intro and I can't understand the lyrics. Cut some of the wacky effects on your voice and it'd be good. If you are just starting out this is really good though.
2020-01-24 20:38
#31
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Canada ropzGOD 
It is my 4th song. My pronounciation of words in general is terrible and I know what you mean, I tried to pronounce the words more clearly, but didnt work everytime. Its in german which add to the unclearity of what I say. Thats definetly something I will try to improve. I love the intro, it gets you hyped for whats next, guess its just difference of music styles. Thank you for your input!!
2020-01-24 20:40
I didn't even realise what language it was man, I heard some English words and saw your flag so I just assumed it was English. The intro is just a lesser version of the time they do it in Sicko mode, I'd cut it or try to improve it next time.
2020-01-24 20:43
#42
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Canada ropzGOD 
Yeah I am using a lot of english words, because german isnt the easiest language to write lyrics in. Yeah, I like to fakeflag. Thank you though!
2020-01-24 20:55
I'm looking forward to your next song man. I massively respect you for asking people for criticism on your songs. This is something which is immensely rare among a lot of musicians who are too proud of their work and are not willing to improve. I hope you do actually use some of the advice though, not only mine but from other users too.
2020-01-24 20:57
#46
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Canada ropzGOD 
Thank you man, I really appreciate the criticsm. I have definetly tried to improve upon my other songs, and I actually hoped I did. I had gotten a fair amount of hate, also from not even taking criticsm that well. I will definetly learn from this. Thank you.
2020-01-24 21:00
#30
OCEAN | 
Reunion 1iquser 
no opinion like man this isnt even rap
2020-01-24 20:40
#32
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Canada ropzGOD 
Never claimed it was, I would consider it Trap/Melodic-(T)Rap/Cloud-Tap/Soundcloud-Rap.
2020-01-24 20:41
#34
OCEAN | 
Reunion 1iquser 
this is melodic pop with a trap beat. which is like ew. if you wanna make poppy and catchy shit get a good beat w/o trap influence
2020-01-24 20:42
#38
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Canada ropzGOD 
I am not trying to be Pop, I wanna make music I like which is what I have said above. I guess you could give a listen to my other songs and get a better picture of what I am doing.
2020-01-24 20:46
#39
OCEAN | 
Reunion 1iquser 
my point is, don't use trap beats because they suck fucking ass
2020-01-24 20:47
#40
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Canada ropzGOD 
I like them, thats just our different preferencies of music styles 🤷‍♂️ What would you reckon I should use?
2020-01-24 20:49
#41
OCEAN | 
Reunion 1iquser 
some lofi shit Earl Sweatshirt type beat
2020-01-24 20:51
#43
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Canada ropzGOD 
I see. I mean I dont like Lofi that much but I appreciate ear sweatshirt. The last time I geniounly tried to tap I sound like I had an aneurism, maybe if I have smth good id release kt.
2020-01-24 20:56
first you need to add lyrics i didn't understand one word second i don't love trap at all, i just like cool beats and your beat is ok and last one why is every trap/rap song is under 2 minutes for me a song must be at least 2:30 minutes so; 4.5/10
2020-01-24 20:42
#36
OCEAN | 
Reunion 1iquser 
time restrictions are stupid some rap songs is a 9/10 and most songs are under 2 minutes
2020-01-24 20:43
#37
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Canada ropzGOD 
Thanks for your input! I would have loved to add a video in the backround with subtitles, but I was unable due to my Sony Vegas crashing after everything I do. I will add a Genius Page as soon as I am on my PC. Also the language is german, incase you didnt know. The reason for it being under 2 minutes, and I am going to be completly honest here is that people are gonna listen to a shorter song quite more than a 2:30+, and replay it more often which results in more streams/views and adds to the catchiness of the song. I also didnt think that a 2nd worse would fit in this. Thanks again!
2020-01-24 20:45
Lovely 8/8
2020-01-24 21:00
#47
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Canada ropzGOD 
Holy shit thank you!
2020-01-24 21:01
Pretty good but that autotune is just too much
2020-01-24 21:02
#49
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Canada ropzGOD 
Thank you. It would sound worse without it, because my voice is very inconsistent. I also like the effect of it.
2020-01-24 21:04
#52
tarik | 
Norway MD! 
How old r u
2020-01-24 21:26
#53
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Canada ropzGOD 
15, 16 ssoon
2020-01-24 21:49
#75
tarik | 
Norway MD! 
Keep grinding dawg, u got a decent flow, everything gonna get better with time and ur voice gonna become "deep" soon
2020-01-25 03:31
#82
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Canada ropzGOD 
It is already pretty deep, its just my singing voice, which I cant keep consistently in every song I do, but whatever. I just dont like singing in my deep voice, because it sounds bad.
2020-01-25 13:09
#93
tarik | 
Norway MD! 
Maybe take singing lessons, definitely gonna help
2020-01-25 13:52
I genuinely can't understand how people can listen to this everyday, not trying to insult, just curious. I mean it really sounds like the combination of all the rap songs that came out in 2019. If you are happy with it, i guess it's good. Idk much about rap stuff but if you are enjoying it i would say create more music but please do something new and add your touch to it. We have enough generic sounding music already, try to create something that will be remembered and not be forgotten in 2 weeks. Good luck!
2020-01-24 21:59
#57
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Canada ropzGOD 
Thank your for the answer! I mean I like this style of music, thats why I am doing this. I take heavy inspiration to what I listen to. I also know that a lot of people like this Cloud-Rap-esque or Soundcloud-Rap style and listen to it. I am always trying to add my own flair, but I never know if it is enough to make it stand out. A lot of people here said it is average, and to an extent catchy, so I guess I didnt. I will try my best in the future. Thank yoU!
2020-01-24 22:02
#56
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Canada ropzGOD 
Update: Added a Genius Page for more clarity to the lyrics. genius.com/M1tsu-raf-simons-lyrics
2020-01-24 21:59
#60
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Ethiopia sexiestuser 
i think you need to work on lyrics and autotune setup 6/10 for a beginner do you own any raf simons though?
2020-01-24 22:09
#62
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Canada ropzGOD 
Used to have and sold it for money Thank you though!
2020-01-24 22:09
reposted all your songs and liked very underrated good luck mens)))
2020-01-24 23:36
#70
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Canada ropzGOD 
Wow thank you!!! You dont know how happy that makes me!
2020-01-24 23:55
i dont know if you can see your followers but im paragoN-
2020-01-24 23:56
#73
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Canada ropzGOD 
You are? Yeah I was wondering who he was, thank you for your support!
2020-01-25 02:17
great man! congrats
2020-01-25 13:09
#86
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Canada ropzGOD 
thank you broo
2020-01-25 13:20
#85
Happy | 
Russia Jovik! 
That's completely not my style so I'll be short, also since I'm a sucker myself, autotune kills it for me instantly, makes me feel like I'm listening to a constantly nagging black woman in the supermarket who's never happy whatever happens. I understood no word, I'm Russian so maybe that's why. That plastic flip flop drumming is so out of place or I'm just used to the real drumming and it's weird to me. One good thing I like about this one is that it's short, it's definitely a plus but all the rest make it unlistenable anyway. I can give you no advice since it's a foreign territory to me but the best of luck no matter what you decide to do. Be happy.
2020-01-25 13:19
#87
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Canada ropzGOD 
So, the language is German, with some English words in there, thats why you dont understand anything. I just like this type of music, thats why I am doing it like this. I use autotune as an aesthetic, and because I like the sound ofi t, which you obviously dont. Thank you anyway!
2020-01-25 13:22
#90
Happy | 
Russia Jovik! 
Yeah I noticed in your posted lyrics, I had a weird taste when I was a teen too, so maybe it will change. If you want money and fame, you might have a shot but even for its style, it's still very weak.
2020-01-25 13:25
#91
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Canada ropzGOD 
I mean I dont think you can really judge whether or not its weak for this style, when you dont listen to it and I mean no offence in that. I do listen to other music, not just this type of stuff, but I have fun doing it.
2020-01-25 13:29
#94
Happy | 
Russia Jovik! 
Yes, true, I said that myself but I don't have to be well aware of the style to value your track's quality, right. I'm doing music myself and I can hear imperfections and flaws, even those funny rappers manage to sound a little better than a working drill so you can path a promised land. And it's only my take on it which doesn't mean much, if you enjoy it, keep doing it.
2020-01-25 13:53
#98
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Canada ropzGOD 
I appreciate the criticsm and your input, thank you! I know that there are flaws etc., thats one of the reasons I am asking here, so i can find them easily and perhaps have a way of improving them.
2020-01-25 14:39
dogshit beat that is just overly loud because it lacks any detail. Can't even understand your lyrics because you are going with that generic mumble rapper voice. You tried so I guess? 1/8?
2020-01-25 15:19
#105
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Canada ropzGOD 
the lyrics are german, might add to you not understanding anything. I quite like the beat, I guess you dont. Thank you though, Joe.
2020-01-25 17:15
Why are you assuming I do not speak German? I can't understand your lyrics because of the shitty auto tune.
2020-01-25 17:25
#108
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Canada ropzGOD 
Its not the autotune, its my inabillity to pronounce words clearly I tried it on this song, didnt work apparently
2020-01-25 22:54
Its the auto-tune. You ask for a rating and then deny everything I say. Don't ask for ratings if your ego is small.
2020-01-25 23:05
#111
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Canada ropzGOD 
Then how come I understand it better without it. I am not denying it, i kniw its not clearly understandable.
2020-01-25 23:20
You refuse criticism so stop asking for ratings.
2020-01-26 15:00
#114
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Canada ropzGOD 
if thats what you think, alright
2020-01-26 18:37
#102
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Poland Adisky 
Nice for 12 year old Srsly though worst part is singing but otherwise its rly good
2020-01-25 15:52
#104
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Canada ropzGOD 
thank you and im not 12
2020-01-25 17:15
#109
Sweden PPH 
music nah, more like noise
2020-01-25 22:56
#112
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Canada ropzGOD 
Understandable, thank you
2020-01-25 23:28
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