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Ukraine russian_govt_are_terrorists 
hi guys, i'm writing an essay regarding interfaith relations for my scholarship to go to international BUBW Conference in Baltimore, Maryland. If somebody could give me a reasonable point how to improve my writing/speech, I'd be very grateful. This link is to view pdf file in google docs docs.google.com/document/d/1PVNqoDOtzOQn..
2020-01-26 05:25
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2020-01-26 05:26
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Peru TheJuan 
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2020-01-26 05:26
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2020-01-26 05:27
docs.google.com/document/d/1TU7HVzeQBpvy.. i'm sorry, try this one. It has to work
2020-01-26 05:32
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United Kingdom Megamo10 
I feel like a social outcast
2020-01-26 05:28
why
2020-01-26 05:33
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United Kingdom Megamo10 
Bad at social interactions
2020-01-26 05:38
I'm sorry ;(
2020-01-26 05:54
BRO DONT INCLUDE UR REAL NAME UNTIL U STOP GIVING US PERMISSION TO VIEW IT
2020-01-26 06:03
Why? My real name is everywhere in the internet
2020-01-26 07:09
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Europe Vallon3 
Are you going to read this out loud, or will somebody read it?
2020-01-26 06:05
Somebody will read it
2020-01-26 07:07
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United States burgerboy 
sceptical is spelled with a k- skeptical in third paragraph." In realities of our time people are mixed both culturally and racially, and the need to break the stereotypes and establish new rules of society is on its biggest peak. " kind of a run on sentence and could be reworded differently. Overall very nicely written and positive message.
2020-01-26 06:13
Thank you!
2020-01-26 07:07
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Canada ProvexPyker 
"were exposed to psychological pressure. From the personal perspective, I believe the reason of majority’s desperate hate on minority lies and begins in the family circle." This sentence doesn't feel right to me.. - From my perspective, the reason for pressure on the minority stems from family circles. The writing is good and it's also good you have other people proofread it. It's good that you don't make it feel like an essay either, but more personal and about yourself. I think something's to work on is just trying to use as little words as possible to explain stuff, getting rid of useless words, trying to phrase it in a simple way. Most of the time, it's easier for the reader to read and understand your point faster that way, there's less of a margin for error where the reader can get confused.
2020-01-26 06:45
Thanks, I'll try to rephrase
2020-01-26 07:08
Also love your advice, I'll work on it
2020-01-26 07:11
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