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R8 my piano song!
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
Hello guys:):):) This is one of my first pieces i made for piano, im beginner when it comes to playing, but i want to know what do you feel about this. I wanted to create an arrangement that actually makes sense and tells a story. Thanks! youtube.com/watch?v=YIrnzLY6C-g
2020-01-27 13:27
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#1
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
bomp?
2020-01-27 13:37
#2
SS | 
Germany cya_in_10 
90% of hltv users dont have headset or earphones songs dont make sense if you cant here them
2020-01-27 13:40
#5
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
so im waiting for opinions from these 10% ;d
2020-01-27 13:55
#3
Happy | 
Russia Jovik! 
You say you're a beginner at playing but what's that you're good at?
2020-01-27 13:40
#7
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
hmm...im good at analysing an emotions which comes from music, so i can place them into my music as well;d but this is really beginner playing
2020-01-27 14:03
#9
Happy | 
Russia Jovik! 
I like it, the video is edited good also. What's key is this in? Sounds very sweet and relaxing. A bit repetitive but I like the whole composition, if it's dragged for over 5 minutes I think you would add some more melodies and perhaps, key change, to spice it up and keep you interested till the end.
2020-01-27 14:11
#11
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
Thanks bro:0 It's C minor, which always sounds sweet:) Yeah i know its repetitive it could be more varied, but i just like using ostinato
2020-01-27 14:47
#12
Happy | 
Russia Jovik! 
Great skill display, keep doing it.
2020-01-27 14:48
#16
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
big thanks, my friend!
2020-01-27 15:04
c minor harmonic?
2020-01-27 23:40
#43
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
it's build on C dorian scale
2020-01-27 23:51
oh kinda epic you get the minor plaguance thing going on
2020-01-27 23:53
#46
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
wow, i dont know music theory that good, it was not intentional for sure;d you mean plagal cadence?
2020-01-28 00:00
its a minor plagal think about it c minor -> G instead of C -> G
2020-01-28 00:01
#53
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
wow, you are right man, it's c minor and g major from the "confession" part
2020-01-28 11:07
#4
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Hungary mEZENCEphalon 
cool mens))) 👍👍 7/8 a bit repetitive but very nice
2020-01-27 13:44
#19
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
thank you, my hungarian bro!
2020-01-27 16:27
Pretty good :) Gl on studying!
2020-01-27 13:58
#20
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
thank you very much:)
2020-01-27 18:01
Just listened to it. Not bad tbh, but I felt like its kinda boring overall, as I didnt hear enough variety to see a story in it. I think this might be a problem with its length aswell though, its actually pretty hard to send people on a journey without lyrics in 4-5 minutes. Here is a guy that might be interesting to you and you might learn alot from it: youtube.com/watch?v=ikBg4BDgsso Cheers!
2020-01-27 14:05
#21
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
thanks m8! maybe you're right, but i just like ostinato, i like to repeat same pattern. I heard this guy in the past, very nice:P
2020-01-27 19:14
8/8 Nice mens)))
2020-01-27 14:11
#23
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
thanks men)
2020-01-27 20:04
#13
Yeet | 
Spain H0TDOGG 
8/8 beautyful song mens))) 😎👌
2020-01-27 14:50
#32
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
ty, my beautiful friend
2020-01-27 22:46
#40
Yeet | 
Spain H0TDOGG 
Np mens))) 😎👍
2020-01-27 23:38
#14
OCEAN | 
Reunion 1iquser 
that's actually really cool keep doing your shit and don't let anyone bring you down
2020-01-27 14:50
#33
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
thanks bro! i will do my shit everyday!:):)
2020-01-27 22:59
#15
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Yugoslavia seeeed 
Its allright i suppose. At first the lack of variety and change made me think that it would build up into some grand drone piano piece, but then i noticed it was just 5 minutes long :/ Tho it made me wanna listen to Sakamoto so thats cool.
2020-01-27 14:57
#38
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
ty my friend!
2020-01-27 23:26
Gj. Its nice! I just finished roch ar vugale from tiersen and i have to learn prelude 934 for my jury
2020-01-27 15:19
#41
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
thanks bro! Good luck:)
2020-01-27 23:39
Ty bro u2
2020-01-28 09:24
I never listen to his kind of music but its very relaxing and you sound talented.
2020-01-27 15:22
#55
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
im very pleased, thanks bro!
2020-01-28 22:20
I suppose I’m obligated to post here as I’m a Jazz piano major studying at U of Toronto right now. I’ll start off by saying that personally it’s a bit ditzy for my taste, but that’s ok, it’s your composition and your music. I would say that you should study Mozart, Handel and guys of that sort. You could learn a lot from discovering their solo piano compositions.
2020-01-27 19:40
You should listen to this song: youtube.com/watch?v=aMorAdnCixg A professor at the Sydney Conservatorium Of Music also selected that piece to be studied and analyzed by his students. Its a very incredible song imho. I suggest not skipping the first minutes :D
2020-01-27 21:05
Wtf this song is a mix of metal, classic and jazz?
2020-01-27 21:04
What about this would be a bait? *edit* nice edit dude. I dont really care about giving a song a fixed genre, but there is definately some classical and metal elements in it. There is also some jazz, especially in the drums at times and the whole composition of the song is far from "standard".
2020-01-27 21:12
#39
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Yugoslavia seeeed 
That song is bad 😎
2020-01-27 23:31
#27
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
wow, i love part from 0:49
2020-01-27 22:25
Saaaame. The combination of everything together is nice, but its mainly the drums that drive this part for me!
2020-01-28 13:15
#28
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
i had to check what "ditzy" means;dd Well, if im correct, you say my track is a little bit stupid? I mean the melodies are? Maybe, but i dont understand how did you come up with this conclusion. Im not a musician yet, so maybe i will understand in the future, ty for your opinion:)
2020-01-27 22:33
No, no... not stupid, sorry if it came off that way. By no means do I think it’s stupid. What I meant was it had a light tone (nothing wrong with that) and was quite musically basic. Of course as you are learning, for a first composition it’s great. I do recommend you check out Mozart and Handel as it fits your musical narrative. Good luck.
2020-01-28 01:10
#52
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
Ahh, of course, i totally agree, i had to compose something, that would not be too hard to play for me;d So it is very basic musically. Ofc i know their music, especially Mozart's, but i prefer romantic composers. Thanks man! Gl
2020-01-28 10:50
#35
OCEAN | 
Reunion 1iquser 
can you play giant steps?
2020-01-27 23:01
Yes.
2020-01-28 01:10
#29
COCAINE | 
Mongolia bozgor 
keep grinding men))))
2020-01-27 22:36
#56
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
ty men))!!!
2020-01-28 22:53
#30
Bulgaria vLvX 
Nice one, 8/8 for shots and editing, I really like the captions.
2020-01-27 22:39
how can I reach you, bro? We can do sth together
2020-01-27 22:45
#37
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
pm:)
2020-01-27 23:10
8/8 with higher feelings and only memories left being my favorite parts.
2020-01-27 23:00
#36
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
Im glad about that opinion, this partition is the essence of this piece;)Personally i like infatuation most:) Thanks!
2020-01-27 23:09
Dogshit. Just quit piano
2020-01-27 23:59
#48
NEO | 
Poland sedi 
thanks my friend, i will!
2020-01-28 00:20
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