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College Mens come here (English)
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United States tylertempo 
had to write essay about why creativity leads to success for a scholarship so I'm not poor. Need constructive criticism: "Creativity is the backbone of our society and arguably the greatest human quality. Innovation pushes thought and progress forward and carries us as a society every waking day. I am a firm believer that creativity stems from the curiosity of our unique and diverging minds. The most successful corporations of our time have ascended to the heights they have because of innovation through trial and tribulation. Take Apple, for instance, Mr. Steve Jobs and Steve Wozniak forefronted the personal computer revolution by providing a reliable product that was marketed to the consumer and masses. That company founded no less than fifty years ago, is currently at a comfortable fourth place in the Fortune 500 list. The success of that corporation has inspired other companies to try and take market share away from them. This competition pushes more innovative thought to retain their status as an elite force in the global market and thus pushes technology forward. Money is often associated with success, and although not inherently true, it is becoming less of a fallacy and more of a reality in today's time. Success does not have to be about money, it can be determined by achievement and milestones. I am an avid writer, for me, crafting short stories and receiving critical appraise and validation from my colleagues and instructors is a success to me. Creativity inspires other, whether it be out of malice and greed or just the desire to better oneself. I believe that the general consensus would be that creativity is a unique and wonderful, distinctly human characteristic. I am emphasizing and articulating my creativeness in this very essay to ensure my success for my future endeavors in university. That is what I believe correlates individual creativity to success. "
2020-07-30 00:14
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tldr?
2020-07-30 00:15
tldr
2020-07-30 00:15
Just write that you're not White, and they'll give it to you
2020-07-30 00:18
#7
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United States tylertempo
that's what I did xD
2020-07-30 00:19
this is an intro class i guess? usually essays are written in 3rd person
2020-07-30 00:17
#6
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United States tylertempo
No, just a 500 word essay for like 1k
2020-07-30 00:18
tldr pleaaaase
2020-07-30 00:17
#9
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United States tylertempo
come to Brazil
2020-07-30 00:22
#8
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Europe BIG_BIGFAN
BIG #1!
2020-07-30 00:21
i would help you but i'mtoo tired, i come back in the morning
2020-07-30 00:23
#12
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United States tylertempo
I love you
2020-07-30 00:28
2/8 cuz language you use is shit. Translated it to Russian 7/8 Translated to Ukrainian 8/8 Translated to Kazakh 88/8
2020-07-30 00:23
#13
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United States tylertempo
hahaha <3
2020-07-30 00:29
8/8 your essay is excellent
2020-07-30 00:33
#15
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United States tylertempo
thank you<3! I realized I made a spelling error with "other" instead of "others" but fuck it, it's fine. I shat that out in like 10 minutes lololol
2020-07-30 00:35
you are welcome m8
2020-07-30 00:36
#17
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Denmark iLoVeReD
Delete that shit and tell that if they won't rate your empty work high, big black man behind you will break into their house.
2020-07-30 00:38
#18
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United States tylertempo
LMFAO
2020-07-30 00:44
Is that not very short for an essay?
2020-07-30 00:51
#22
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United States tylertempo
only 500 words
2020-07-30 00:57
the first sentence already says, that 'you want them to like this essay'
2020-07-30 00:54
#23
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United States tylertempo
pog
2020-07-30 00:58
I have two degrees and a verified 140 IQ with Mensa! Overall, it's okay. Not bad for your age, keep writing and you'll improve! Best of luck! 😎👍
2020-07-30 00:56
#24
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United States tylertempo
thank mr. proud american
2020-07-30 00:58
You're welcome my friend! The best thing you can do, if you're serious about this scholarship, is write out 10 of these out and read them. Then score them yourself and have some intelligent friend/parents do the same! you'll start to understand why certain speech patterns flow better! It's all about how it reads! And my last thing i'll point out, don't try to force in so many obscure words and adjectives, it adds the opposite affect that you're intending!
2020-07-30 01:03
#26
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United States tylertempo
seriously, thank you. I'll remember this <3
2020-07-30 01:04
You're a smart young man! 😎👍 Send me the final version in DM's if you would like!
2020-07-30 01:05
#29
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United States tylertempo
It's only a small scholarship for like 1k. But there's different stages it can go through. I found it in like 2 weeks if i win or not. I will definitely let you know if i win tho
2020-07-30 01:06
Break a leg kid! 😎👍
2020-07-30 01:11
#28
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United States WumboCumbo
Write down that you're a LGTBQ POC and that the only way forward in our society today is to dismantle the oppressive systems in our society that hold minorities back from expressing themselves freely allowing for more open and progressive ideas to come forward in order to lead our country to success through a newly created American socialist ideology. ^ there u go put something like that somewhere and u will be have a full ride scholarship ez
2020-07-30 01:06
#30
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United States tylertempo
funny thing is, I actually am a technical poc so you best believe I made sure to put that I'm black on every scholarship lmfao. It got me into schools I wouldn't have if I put I was just white xd
2020-07-30 01:08
#32
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United States WumboCumbo
lmaoo nice I have a white ass name so they could just kinda figure it out lmao
2020-07-30 01:23
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