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French adults please
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Russia VelsVivard 
I wrote a song and want to have second chorus and the last verse of it in French, if you're willing to try to help me to convert it from English to French, I'll show you the lyrics, either here in a reply or PM. But beware, it's not just a translation, it's a lyrical text and you're limited for the same amount of vowels as well as rhyming of each line. It's not easy but possible if you know both English and French. I'll give you a credit for the song as a French piece writer when it's out but I can't say when it will be.
2020-11-25 14:14
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#2
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Germany Effizienz
okay 😀👍
2020-11-25 14:17
#4
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France Poloqua
i will 😎👌
2020-11-25 14:20
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#5
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Russia VelsVivard
Do you have any experience of writing? Translating? Whatever?
2020-11-25 14:21
40 replies
#6
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France Poloqua
A little bit, let me try it out 😎👍
2020-11-25 14:22
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#9
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Russia VelsVivard
"As Moon lights the sky and all of the land I get dreamy again But all that I think of this lonely night is to just hold your hand Wink your eyes once, and, I'll... understand There is a chance for me to be your man" The verse.
2020-11-25 14:24
38 replies
It's not easy man )) gl to my fellow french man)
2020-11-25 14:29
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#11
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Russia VelsVivard
Told you ma friend! But I'd really like that to happen, French is sublime and such a fit for the ballads, exactly like one I wrote.
2020-11-25 14:31
i find it kinda cringe af but im not an artist or musician so good luck
2020-11-25 14:32
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#14
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Russia VelsVivard
What's cringe about it if I may ask?
2020-11-25 14:32
4 replies
You may ask. Just in general I find romantic poetry cringe as hell, yours is not an exception!
2020-11-25 14:35
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#17
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Russia VelsVivard
Well, thanks for explanation, it seems very strange to me.
2020-11-25 14:36
2 replies
You are welcome! Good luck buddy!
2020-11-25 14:37
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#19
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Russia VelsVivard
You too! You too.
2020-11-25 14:38
#20
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France Poloqua
Quand la Lune illumine ciel et terre, je me mets presque à rêver Mais sous cette nuit solitaire je veux juste te prendre la main Cligne ne serait-ce qu'une seule fois, et enfin J'aurais peut-être l'espoir d'être à tes côtés I can't get the last line ;( i gave it my best shot !
2020-11-25 14:40
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#22
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Russia VelsVivard
Are there really the same amount of vowels? Could I ask you for the vocalise on this? No need to sing, just read it so I get to know how to pronounce it and later sing.
2020-11-25 14:42
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#26
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France Poloqua
where can i do that ?
2020-11-25 14:44
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#30
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Russia VelsVivard
vocaroo.com - try there!
2020-11-25 14:47
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#33
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France Poloqua
voca.ro/1mRsmRfi4flk Here u go, i've got shit voice ;(
2020-11-25 14:50
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#34
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Russia VelsVivard
Thank you very much! Beautiful tone of your voice, very clear. I'll write to you via PM to ask for your name if this is the version that will stay, I'm just bugged over that misconduct of the last line, other than that, everything is okay!
2020-11-25 14:53
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#36
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France Poloqua
thx 😁👍 no need to put my name bro, use it as u want :)
2020-11-25 14:56
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#39
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Russia VelsVivard
Wouldn't you like it? Just to be accredited for something you've done? I'm not saying that it will receive much attention but still nice to know.
2020-11-25 14:58
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#46
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France Poloqua
i'm ok with it :) do you already have the full version without this verse ? I'm quite curious :D
2020-11-25 15:03
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#48
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Russia VelsVivard
Yes, the English lyrics are already written! But here's the chorus that I'd like to have converted too! Here it is: Tell me, oh, tell me When will you appear With all of your presents and body appeal Sing it or whisper to me in my ear "Darlin' I love you, I'll always be near!" A bit sleazy but the melody is warm.
2020-11-25 15:05
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#62
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France Poloqua
Dis-moi, oh dis-moi Quand viendras-tu enfin, Me couvrir de cadeaux et de baisers, Avec ta voix mielleuse, doucement me susurrer Chéri, je t'aime, je serais toujours à tes côtés
2020-11-25 15:29
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#64
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Russia VelsVivard
It goes very smooth, thank you!
2020-11-25 15:31
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#71
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France Poloqua
np, have fun with it !
2020-11-25 15:39
This chorus end is definitely better than mine
2020-11-25 15:43
#74
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France ABxel
Ta voix a pas changé depuis le lycée frr :p
2020-11-25 17:33
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#76
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France Poloqua
spotted
2020-11-25 17:39
it's pretty good
2020-11-25 14:43
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#27
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France Poloqua
thx :D
2020-11-25 14:44
Quand la Lune illumine ciel et terre, je redeviens songeur Ce qui me vient à l'esprit en cette nuit esseulé c'est tenir ta main. Cligne ne serait-ce qu'une seule fois, et peut-être enfin Tu m'accorderas la chance d'être ton humble serviteur. You can try this version also.
2020-11-25 14:49
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#29
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Russia VelsVivard
I think there's a bit too many vowels in the second line, isn't it? And is there a way to keep the rhyme for the last line? It doesn't have to be the exact same words, you can play with it!
2020-11-25 14:47
#31
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France Poloqua
he wants the exact syllabus, that's where it gets hard but i like it !
2020-11-25 14:47
very nice one
2020-11-25 15:00
#72
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Russia VelsVivard
I translated it just to see the actual beauty in this and I must say you've got all it takes, if you aren't a writer already, you can become one. Very beautiful, sir!
2020-11-25 15:42
2 replies
Thx monsieur, have a good day
2020-11-25 17:34
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#77
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Russia VelsVivard
And you too, and you too!
2020-11-25 17:40
Pretty good actually
2020-11-25 15:34
Are you trying to get a french girl or what ? My take on it : Alors que la lune illumine le ciel et la terre, je redeviens rêveur (songeur ?). Tout ce à quoi je pense en cette nuit solitaire, c’est de te tenir la main. Cligne une fois des yeux, je comprendrais. Il y a une chance pour moi d’être ton compagnon.
2020-11-25 15:06
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#51
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Russia VelsVivard
Thanks for your version, I wish we kept the rhyme for it because it's really essential but I'm thankful anyway.
2020-11-25 15:07
2 replies
IT's hard to keep the sense and the rythm... Best is clearly #40
2020-11-25 15:08
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#55
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Russia VelsVivard
My gratitude to you either way! French language is beautiful beyond description.
2020-11-25 15:09
Not easy tbh, going from English to French is really hard, especially for rhymes. I give it a try for fun: "Alors que la Lune éclaire le ciel, la terre, je redeviens rêveur, Mais ce à quoi je pense pendant cette nuit solitaire est conquérir ton cœur, Un seul clin d'œil et j'aurais compris, Qu'il y a une chance pour moi d'être ton mari." I had to change a little bit of the sense for rhymes so here are the lyrics retranslated in english: "As Moon lights the sky and all of the land I get dreamy again But all that I think of this lonely night is conquer your heart Only one wink and I would have... understand There is a chance for me to be your man"
2020-11-25 15:08
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#44
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Russia VelsVivard
Sounds very good and looks too! May I ask you to vocalise it? (vocaroo.com) No need to sing it, just read it and I'll get to know how it sounds.
2020-11-25 15:01
6 replies
I'm sick and have a shit voice, but google translate does the job pretty much! :x
2020-11-25 15:10
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#57
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Russia VelsVivard
Don't say so! I'm sure your voice is sweet, I'm yet to meet a Frenchman with a bad voice! But anyway, I'll write to you via PM to ask for your name if this is the version that cuts it!
2020-11-25 15:14
#60
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Russia VelsVivard
You could see about doing a chorus if you will, #48. You did great on this one.
2020-11-25 15:18
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That's even harder lmao (btw aren't you Jovik? I recognize the speech and I think we already discussed on instrumental songs). Struggled with the middle line tho "Dis moi, oh dis moi, Quand tu te montreras Avec tous tes cadeaux, tes jolies formes, Puisses tu me le chanter, le murmurer "Chéri je t'aime, je serai toujours à tes côtés"" Tell me, oh, tell me When will you appear With all your presents, your beautiful curves, Could you sing it to me, whisper it, "Darlin' I love you, I'll always be near!"
2020-11-25 15:32
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#69
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Russia VelsVivard
Woah it's very good! You took care of the rhyme, it lays on the melody so nicely! Much thanks to the other guys whose version I adore as well, but I'm keeping yours! Oh and yes, I'm Jovik, I remember you too, not very well, but we definitely met before!
2020-11-25 15:36
1 reply
Sent you a vocaroo in pm
2020-11-25 15:36
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