this is like 2007 hardbass tecktonik dance music
I'm a musical producer aswell, nice to meet a fellow musician :D
Seems you might be getting somewhere with this track in terms of melody and harmony, but It clearly lacks structure so Im assuming you're trying to work some things up and this is unfinished. You should try to develop your timbre for each instrument a little bit further, and you really need to mix your elements better. Are you mixing with good reference headphones ?