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r8 my poetry
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Europe OFFICIAL_HLTV_FILIPINO 
Clouds line up in a scattered formation in my room- that yields fornication i had taught an extreme form of education considered this as my number one motivation a fascinating face so benevolent i couldnt barely tell it's innocent with a gag around the mouth She knows the ship was sailing south. a relic that has not reached antique soft skin so slick to a point you can't critique such is a face of a chick With cuffs around her hands her body wants to dance i made my demands infront of my lance Ropes embedded in roses as pedals started to fall a striking fascade as her pose her diminutive physique started to crawl Loud as the sirens- screamed into the void echoing through the board knowing she is toyed she strook a beautiful chord As the deed went through The sun began to withdrew "A job well done", I said to myself As I threw my toy in the shelf
2021-05-04 20:15
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Romania Lil_fps
She knows the ship was sailing south LMAO
2021-05-04 20:16
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2021-05-04 20:19
couldve just said "i have a bdsm fetish"
2021-05-04 20:20
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bdsm pedo fetish**
2021-05-04 20:20
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Russia VelsVivard
3/10. Work on the rhythmic part and overall structure.
2021-05-04 20:20
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thanks, my friend told me esoteric poetry structure and not so strong rhymes were incorporated by known poets so thats why i have this
2021-05-04 20:22
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Russia VelsVivard
Neah, screw the rules and traditions, it should be going with the flow and keep you in, it just should be generally good. It's a mess but with little potential for the future.
2021-05-04 20:26
4/10 shit overall but somewhat funny
2021-05-04 20:21
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hope u has a laugh
2021-05-04 20:23
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